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Thursday, April 6, 2017

Chapter 3 - Mercedes is caught by her roommate


Mercedes walked quickly to the library restroom and found that the two stalls were already in use.   She stood there, fidgeting and playing with her hair.   She heard one of the toilets flush and went into the stall as quickly as possible.

Her roommate entered quietly and listened carefully as she heard the unmistakable sounds of hands moving quickly over something wet and slippery.  She heard Mercedes breathing become deep and a very soft moan escape her lips.  She went to the door and noisily opened it to make sure it was clear someone came in.

"Mercedes, are you still in here?" She knew the answer but she wanted Mercedes to know who just came in.

"Yes, I'm here." 

"Are you busy?" The way she said it indicated just how Mercedes might be busy.

"No..." Mercedes lied, though she didn't know why.

"Oh, I was just checking, I heard some moaning when I came, I wasn't sure who was doing what in here."  That was also a lie but Rebecca wanted to see if would confess or not.  It was clear how turned on Mercedes was and she probably knew what caused it.  

Rebecca had a dominant streak in her and as she noticed more about Mercedes she began to formulate a plan to see if Mercedes might submit to her.


The tension and need Mercedes had was starting to subside and it was clear that Rebecca wasn't going to leave anytime soon so she got up and made herself presentable.

"Why are you suddenly so interested in what I'm doing?"  The annoyed tone in her voice made it clear that Mercedes was frustrated.

"Because I can see a new side of you."

Rebecca was standing just inches away from her.  Rebecca was taller and bigger than Mercedes in every way.   Rebecca stared into Mercedes eyes, daring her to resist, to push back.

She didn't and Rebecca knew that she had her.

"I think we need to take this back to our room Mercedes." Rebecca said in a very commanding tone.

Mercedes stared at her, wanting to resist, wanting to say no, but the tingling in her stomach, the flutter in her chest told her otherwise.   She tried to swallow but suddenly her mouth was dry.  She opened her mouth to speak and Rebecca stopped her.

Holding up her right hand, index finger raised, she said in a confident tone, "No, do not speak.  Just come with me."

They walked in silence back to their dorm room.   As the door closed Mercedes could feel the tension in the air and didn't know where to look, so she looked down at the floor.

Rebecca walked to her  new submissive roommate and eyed her up and down.

"I like how quickly you follow my orders."  Her voice was hard and firm, it was clear she had a dominant streak in her.

"What I don't like is your tone in the library.  You were being a bit of a brat back there.  You know what happens to little brats, right?" She stood right in front of Mercedes, and put her hand under her chin, tilting her head up.  As she held Mercedes chin in her hand she stared at her until Mercedes was forced to look away.

"Answer me, you know what happens to little brats."


"Yes..." was all that Mercedes could squeak out as she looked away.

"What is it brat?"  She continued to hold her chin in her hand.

"Spanked..." Mercedes whispered, feeling her stomach tighten and that feeling of excitement, fear, and nerves start to build.

"Very good, you're learning." Rebecca said, "Now, face the window, hands on the desk, bum out.  I'm going to spank you for being a brat."  She let go of Mercedes face and turned her to face the window.

The waist high desk was against the wall of the room, it was just under the window and allowed them a too look out on the quad while they did their homework.


Mercedes assumed the required position.

"I'm going to spank you with my hand, even though I know you've gotten worse from the Headmaster already.  If you squirm around too much I'm going to spank you on your bare bum.  Do you understand?"

"Yes mam..." 

"Good, now hands on the table, bum out."
Rebecca flipped up her skirt and saw the tiny thong and her slightly bruised cheeks.

"Well, well, well.  What do we have here?  Non-regulation panties?  I bet the Headmaster gave you a good spanking when he saw that.  Now you're going to get another one your bare bum."

Rebecca held the skirt up with her hand started to spank her bare butt.

WHAP - WHAP - WHAP - WHAP - WHAP!



Mercedes took the spanking without a complaint, hoping it might minimize her punishment.  After 20 good swats with her bare hand Rebecca was pleased with how pink her roommates cheeks were.

"You took that pretty easily, I'm impressed."

Mercedes started to get up.

"No, no, no, don't get up just yet, I'm not done with you."

Mercedes could start to feel the familiar tingling "down there" and she was feeling the need to touch herself.  It took all her self-control to stay in position, but she did.

"Very good, stay in that position young lady."

Mercedes heard some movement behind her and wasn't sure what Rebecca was getting.  She found out just a minute later.

"My hand was getting sore so I got something that might be a bit harder for you to take.  Let me know if you think you need something to bite down on."

Mercedes turn around to see Rebecca standing there with a ....

Plimsoll, that she took from the closet.



"This should do nicely.  I don't want to hurt my hand and you seem to be able to take a good hard hand spanking."

"Wait, no, it hurt, really!" Mercedes looked back at Rebecca, hoping for a little sympathy.

"You're right it hurt.  It hurt my hand spanking your bare butt." She laughed as she said and then put her hand on Mercedes back and held her in place.

CRACK! CRACK! CRACK! CRACK!

The blows from the plimsoll came down hard and fast and they stung Mercedes cheeks.

"Ow! Oww! OWW!"
This time Mercedes cried out, this hurt!

"Keep howling like a cry baby and I'll stuff your panties in your mouth to keep you quiet.  You don't want everyone nearby to hear you get spanked, do you?"

Mercedes gripped the edge of the desk and tried to keep quiet.

CRACK! CRACK! CRACK!

The blows from the plimsoll came down slower but were harder.

"OW!! Owww!"

She couldn't help herself, it hurt and she howled.

"That's it!" Rebecca declared, quickly pulling the small thong down and off Mercedes.

"Wait, wait,,," Mercedes didn't get up but wasn't sure what was going to happen.

In seconds her thong was down and she stepped out of it like a good submissive.  She turned her head to see Rebecca standing there with her damp thong in her hand, looking at her expectantly.

"I... I'll keep quiet..." She had funny feeling in her stomach.  That funny submissive, excited, nervous feeling.  She had never been forced to hold her own panties in her mouth as a gag before.

"Too late my little submissive.  Open wide."

Rebecca stood there, waiting, watching, hoping Mercedes would submit to this.  Rebecca was immensely turned on by spanking her roommate.   She could smell and feel how wet her submissive roommates thong was, so she knew she was excited as well.

She held it in a small tight ball in her hand, waiting for Mercedes to open her mouth.

She didn't have to wait long.  Slowly, Mercedes looked down and opened her mouth to accept the thong gag.

"That's a good girl, open wider..."
Rebecca drew out Mercedes submission.  It filled her with power to make Mercedes stretch open her mouth and then hold her used thong as a gag.

"Good girl, now you won't draw attention to yourself while I finish your punishment."

Mercedes turned to face the window and it felt odd and very submissive to have her own thong in her mouth.  She could taste something there too.  It was her own desire, her own excitement.  She blushed as she realized how excited she was being spanked by her roommate.  She looked out the window and waited excitedly for her punishment to continue.

More on her punishment in Chapter 4







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